TA (27 july / nigeria)

My Thougths

if there is something to behold at my non-existence,
it would be my existence.
if there is something to behold at my existence, it would be my life.
if there is something to behold at my life,
it would be my breath.
if there is something to behold at my breath,
it would be my hope.
if there is something to behold at my hopes,
it would be my future.
if there is something to behold at my future,
it would be my success.
if there is something to behold at my success,
it would be my seeds.
if there is something to behold at my seeds,
it would be my old age.
if there is something to behold at my old age,
it would be my rest.
if there is something to behold at my rest,
it would be my good deeds.
if there is something to behold at my good deeds
it would be my death,
And if there is something to behold at my death,
it should be my eternity.

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Comments (4)

well used anaphora: ''if there is something to behold at my '' in this lyric poem..nice message..10
Thoughts have power; thoughts are energy. And you can make your world or break it by your own thinking. Life is a great big canvas, and you should throw all the paint on it you can..... The uniqueness of the poem has really grasped my thoughts too Dear Poetess.......
Dunno how u got the right idea about life................but one thing i know is dat u're gud
this is cool keep it up