You And The Butterfly

the butterfly measures
its life span
in just a very short moment
and it has enough

you measure yours
in years and years yet there is no moment
when you said
you have enough.

why? do tell me.

by RIC BASTASA

Comments (4)

This poem could be written better but I enjoyed reading this
this is a very interesting poem, the entire dying relationship is handled well here
Please write this a bit better.
Neutral Tones encapsulates my feelings of a dying (dead?) relationship. My god this is a beautiful poem!