Long, Too Long America

Poem By Walt Whitman

Here is me alone sitting under the stars
looking at the sky and the most beautiful feature my very sweet moon in the darkest night

thinking if my sweet love is thinking of me by now
imagining what if we were here together by this time
what if i get lost in your eyes even if it was for the last time?
i think destiny will take away one of us from the other
i am just so very sad, even have a lot of fears that i cannot keep going without you

feeling sorry that i have never felt the warmth of your body lying next to me
i am feeling sorry for myself for i have never seen myself in white standing in front of you
feeling sorry for not giving you a promise to be there for you till i give up my last breath......

April 6,2009

Comments about Long, Too Long America

Lovely write 10+
Emotional vibrant...well worded piece...thanks Little 10
great work, the poem has a sweet sad vibe, but i like it......straight 10
nice work dear friend....10
it is great poem ans fntastic feeling. but i can touch something sad in this poem. don't feel sorry :) cheers Timon

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