****new Beginnings

the clouds
................dark in the horizon
..............................prepare for departure

by Ben Gieske Click to read full poem

Comments (6)

Very nicely written; I enjoyed it.
Well written and beautiful philosophy. I love the power this piece delvers with so few words. Take care.
aint that the truth. we learn best by example
Excellent Ben, this is so true as Meggie and Sandra have commented too! Wouldn't it be great if we could display free verse without having to put all the dots in as I can see this would look even better than it already is (if that is possible) . 10 love Karin
yes, I fully agree, Ben..you are right then..Lovely write
Very true Ben... I like your presentation style too..10