IOI (7/4/1934 / Hebburn.Co Durham U.K)

Nice Try

I am a Christian gentleman.
I would like to, if you agree
to fall in with my little plan
to get to know you Biblically.
She was well read; she slapped his face.
She knew exactly what he meant
and put him firmly in his place.
She made her anger evident
She was quite pleased though secretly,
that he found her desirable
but did not want to let him see
that she might be persuadable.
His chat up line original
its chance of success minimal.

21-Aug-08
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Comments (1)

Yes Ivor, he should have choose a better line Any other line, might work? All he did was 'to define' That he was - a jerk! A pleasure to read, indeed! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad