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Poem By Peter Shea

You never came home
Sitting alone in my room
Love’s sweet betrayal
Hope shatters like fine crystal
Shards puncture heart – I bleed out…

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ok, sentiment is there, but its the expression of it that counts. it is much harder to get your point across with a short poem such as this. i would recommend re-writing it, adding about...umm....lets say 3 stanza's. this has potential. lets see it.


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