NL (03-10-1993 / People's Republic of China)

On The Day You Leave

On the day you leave,
I’ll write you a poem.
All the words can never weave
Your gift of a home.

On the day you leave,
I’ll write you a song.
A give of love you can’t believe,
I’m sorry it took so long.

On the day you leave,
I’ll write you a letter.
Of all the ways I conceived,
This way’s the better.

Although we feel hollow,
Parting is such sweet sorrow.

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Comments (1)

Great poem. I was impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal