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Originality In Writing
JTC (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

Originality In Writing

Poem By john tiong chunghoo

when my writing
greets your mind
like a waterfall

crashing through
mind lane with
commas, apostrophes
pull stops as it plunges
down the slope

and then glide
along a stretch
to show us what
it sees with all its
commitments to
translating its true
feelings, and sights
sha sha sha all the way down
carrying a heaven with it
i know i have made it

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Comments (2)

The pen which did the writing merits a word of praise!
I like how you guide your reader to see things how you see it... only a talented writer does this.. thanks... I agree with the ending, perfect. Lee