Our Love

What is this feeling?
This burning passion
This heart is yearning for your affection.

I want to know
And understand
This feeling that is so grand.

Like a bird;
Wings widely spread
Having the time of being freed

Although it hurts
I will stand still
‘Cause this is both our will.

Yearning for joy
And sweet harmony
On a place with only you and me.

by Alaude Solus

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Beautiful depiction of bliss of love, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
the sentiments are sliding then....
Although it hurts I will stand still ‘Cause this is both our will. Yearning for joy And sweet harmony On a place with only you and me.. y IT IS FROM BOTH THE SIDES SO NATURALLY IT IS FEELING ALWAYS FINE... LOVELY WRITE AND BEAUTIFUL....10 READ MINE.. ANYWHERE... I MISS... COME HOME
O, this one is my favourite. Truly poetic. Short, but it says it all, absolute gem. It is going on the list of my favourites......10 points