Pacific Days

Washing the barrier reef, the Coral sea,
Brings fresh nutrients to the coral blooms,
Chrysanthemums in splendour
Where fishes of deep orange, blue

by Tom Billsborough Click to read full poem

Comments about Pacific Days

Valsa George 30 Jun 2018 10:22
The shallow water here is a pale azure The deeper cobalt merging into indigo And stays so colour fast for a thousand Miles and more as we sweep eastwards The seas of the West have a deeper, lovely azure shade You have painted a beautiful seascape as if you have seen all those underwater sights with the eyes of a scuba diver! I too have a great fascination for the sea! Lovely write, Tom
Tan Pratonix 25 Oct 2017 11:46
This is a great poem. It is almost if you were there by the Great Barrier Reef and the Coral Sea. Well done, my friend! I can't believe you said it is just a dream. You must have been there in the Great Pacific. I can see you looking down into the deep blue sea, or perhaps immersed in a bathyscape.
Bri Edwards 01 Apr 2017 06:13
i didn't say much the first time around, did i? to MyPoemList and to April 2017's showcase for PH poets, if you don't complain! ! favorite lines: The earth is mostly water. So are we. Our nutrients flow round us too, As those awash within the Coral sea. topic: peace ..............yes, if you avoid the sharks. bri let me know if you don't want me to use it.
Norah Tunney 15 Mar 2017 11:33
I lost myself in your poetic painting again tonight, absolutely delightful. I know I commented before but i found myself reading it again tonight Tom. Wonderful! ! ! !
Siddartha Montik 12 Jan 2017 04:52
Nice write about Nature, thank you. Sir.
Georgie Hilderman 27 Nov 2016 07:59
Very nice description of color, it creates a beautiful image!
Bri Edwards 17 Aug 2016 09:57
From sharp marauding sharks, ..........sharp as in smart or clever, like you and me? ? i've a college friend living for years in Fiji. he would welcome you i think if you would only stop by some day. i'll just stay home and read more of your poems. bri :)
Annette Aitken 31 Jul 2016 09:33
So beauitfully written the scenes you paint with your pen is excellent. so enjoyed this read. Annette
Mihaela Pirjol 22 Apr 2016 08:50
Beautiful imagery and serene mood, blending lovely in this fine-written poem.
Norah Tunney 21 Apr 2016 05:10
I got lost in this beautiful dream also Tom It took me to paradise for a wee while in the midst of my busy day Well written also
Dr Tony Brahmin 21 Apr 2016 05:06
Like passive guardian angels or dispassionate stars. The shallow water here is a pale azure The deeper cobalt merging into indigo.. such a wonderful nature poem you are a great lover of nature...... Fiji, Tonga, Tahiti and Tuamotu, Chile and Peru. like all these in your poem.. write and write and write. you are a creative genius. tony
Kelly Kurt 21 Apr 2016 02:26
A fine dream, indeed. Let us hope that we take global warming seriously before all the coral reefs are gone.
Edward Kofi Louis 21 Apr 2016 02:23
The vast Pacific now begins! Nice piece of work.