Wings Of A Leaf (Haiku)

Red canopied tree
All the leaves fly to the ground
Autumn migration

by douglas lewis

Comments (4)

my favorite part was: 'When I saw you I saw me' That was sooooo cute =] Ellie =]
i like this poem of yourz.... Itz sad n very deep.... I see what waz lyk being with her i assume dat she treated u kinda lyk shit but wanted u sumwat... bt it couldnt b... datz wat it seem lyk
nice poem! really captures the meaning
i really like it.. it's short but it's very good.. your pain seems choppy and a run on.. it's a wonderful piece for a wonderful man, ..~Hazel G.E