Pain Feeling Gone

pain pain pain is all i felt,
scard and frightened,

pain was all around me from everything that had hapened,
what shouldnt have happened,

everynight a tear would trickle down my cheek,
and i could not seek,

for what i felt nobody else would know,
that i wish i could just go..

it was'nt fair,
that nobody would care,

the note was written and then,
finally it had ended and all the pain was gone...

by tasha jeffries

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I like the simplicity of this has a lovely rhythm to it which makes it easy to read. Also the ending is strong, and has a definite feeling of closure so as a reader I feel as though I have completed a journey, I am not left hanging with 'the pain' you speak of... lovely