Paradise Lost

She was my Eve
I was her Adam
Every night we used to sit
In our Garden in the Eden
And look upon the moonlit sky.
A lone star
Grew envious of our love
Not like the serpent
Who grew angry
And it decided to kill our love
By killing itself.
So, it fell between us
And died at once!
Thus we were separated
By light years forever.

by RAJESH.C BOSE

Comments (7)

I am here to review the comments made on this poem. A falling star would have killed both this Adam and his Eve. But I'm not sure the star would have disintegrated in our atmosphere. Or was it an asteroid? The reviewers here are writing only to flatter. That's sad; is PH becoming a Mutual Admiration Society. The blind leading the blind?
Marvellous...............
A clever piece of writing, and a pleasure to read. A memorable write indeed.
A clever piece of writing, and a pleasure to read. A memorable write indeed.
Poet's art of narration is amazing.10 you deserve.
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