(29.07.1959. / Tbilisi)
by Jhaverchand Meghani
Other poems of MEGHANI (28)
Rakta Tapakti So So Jholi Samaranganathi Ave
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13 Sep 2008 06:33
You definitely have something Tsira. It's a certain emotional quality that's hard to define. The unexpected use of language and the introduction of depth/range with carefully chosen phrases make reading your work a genuine pleasure... xxx jim
20 Jun 2008 01:08
I gave this an 8. The structure may not have fit the message delivery as well. I still do not understand the full meaning, but I did comprehend the references to Greek mythology. Beyond that, I'm not sure without more information. GW62
26 Apr 2008 10:21
Thank you Greg for the help.
26 Apr 2008 02:53
Elevated and poignant, suffused with the imagery and symbolism of Greek mythology. Economic and disciplined in the realm of emotions as well as language. A truly remarkable piece of writing, Tsira. Suggestion: change 'astrologer' to astronomer.
24 Mar 2008 01:13
So beautiful the way your use the ancient texts to express the reality of your muse. I love your late blooming cactus and the purple pulse pumping through your veins. There is wonder and awe as well as despair in your words. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥