Please Don'T Leave Me

The stars have gone behind the clouds
The moon has lost its sheen
In the thick night I weep like a child
Because I can no more call you mine

by Tiku akp Click to read full poem

Comments (40)

I will be waiting you other side Don't think I am heartbroken and weak My soul won't ever take rest To your divine love it would forever seek.. i seek divine love. a great desire. love, spiritual. born from the experience of earthly love. tony
Very painful when the one loved does not want to be with us. Well penned.
Beautiful and lovely work. I enjoyed it imensily. Keep them coming poet. Cheers :-
I will be waiting you other side Don't think I am heartbroken and weak My soul won't ever take rest To your divine love it would forever see... beautiful
Typos: please read as: this is a very commendable piece of work!
I will be waiting you other side Don't think I am heartbroken and weak My soul won't ever take rest To your divine love......I enjoy reading your poetry! I always admire your simple and sweet works! This is very commendable piece of work!
Death stalks me where I go For I lost your love without a reason My soul won't ever take rest To your divine love it would forever seek.... a very fine poem. full of emotion. your words carry the reader along with u and share ur sorry and your determination.......... thank u. dear poet. tony
THERE IS NO OTHER SIDE ALL IS HERE NOW ALL KNOW IT POETS HEAR LOVELY POETRY WE ALL are afraid but have to be brave U MUST ALSO
Wow, what a romantic poem...well-expressed feelings..10+++++++
The restless soul of the poet seeks the lovely glance from his love even after death. Excellent.
A touching love poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
O my goodness. This tastes great. I savour with joy. Thanks for engaging us with the outpour of your heart, dear poet. Write more, please.
a really sad poem of love lost but never forgotten? .......wonderfully written.
Meaningful poem written with balance and striking imagery. I really liked it thanks!
I especially like For I lost your love without a reason
This is beautiful and sad, it expresses the unfairness of unrequited love in a great way, thank you
Elusive love it is, emotions well put in words.
I will be waiting you other side good work it is
Such lamentation for lost love touches the readers deeply. Well sung symphony of pain.
i feel you. a soul spilled in ink. this is beautiful. :)