MS (The Twenty-Seventh of January / I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix)

Please Just Give Up

Everybody has given up on me.

I don't care anymore.

There is no point in living anymore.

Sooner or later I am going to die, .

I rather have it NOW!

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Comments (4)

been there felt that, fight the will to end it all, try to be happy and hold on to hope for the future thats what im doing
don't give up kay-kay I'll be here for you
A great way to express ourselves is through poetry. I like free verse and I would love to see you expand on this one. After you have done so, I'd like to read one where you write about how you haven't given up on yourself. There is a strength within you, keep searching.
the days will heal the wounds..be strong..another love will come so soon..a painful touching poem