Pleasure Can Be Pain

Poem By teiaire patrick

Pleasure can be pain
Pleasure can be a game
Pleasure can everything
But when you find it
Everything will change

I thought I wanted pleasure
But it changed my life
All that I thought wasn't true
They lied, it felt horrible
I just didn't know what to do

So I ran away
And never turned back
Because all that had happened
Was in the past

Pleasure can be defined in many ways
But this way is not the same

Comments about Pleasure Can Be Pain

nice poem it was interesting
well, not bad at all for a starter, you can improve on your vocabulary and grammar, then you' ll be ok. you have to do more reading teiaire. keep writing.

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