Pouring

Rain falling from the sky pouring over me
The tears from my eyes pouring over me
The blood from my wound pouring over me
The fear in my heart pouring over me
The regret and the shame pouring over me
The hurt and the pain pouring over me
The darkness from the sky pouring over me
The questions left behind pouring over me
And inside my house
Where i think i am safe now
All the love I gave pouring over until it's gone.

by Chocolate Bunny

Comments (6)

NICE! I like it a lot! You have such great talent! Keep it up!
wow this poem is really deep. i like it alot. it's so strong and it sends chills through me when i read it. great job. i give it a ten
the children poems, I love your stanza
This poem is so nicely written and really is a very touching poem written with a unique style.
This is very good. It is still, pouring over me...
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