Rain

Alleviating, almost a mist,
Vertical, perfect,
Smashing crystals on the,
Rugged floor.

Just a trickle nothing more
But if sweet downpour
Can cause such pain,
Let it rain on me forever.

by Christopher Jackson

Comments (2)

Excellent write, Christopher... interesting use of words and a great ending line! Brian
Chris, You have the makings of a great poet.You have a way with words which I like. But if sweet downpour Can cause such pain, Let it rain on me forever. What a wonderful verse. I like it. Anjana