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Rain, Rain
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Rain, Rain

Poem By Shiloh Thompson

Rain, rain, fall today,
Wash away my debts to pay,
Cleanse me of my sins I pray,
Rain, rain, fall away.

Rain, rain, fall away,
Wash away the blood today,
Wake us from this dream I say,
Rain, rain, here to stay.

Rain, rain, here to stay,
Keep the sin of hate at bay,
Love is coming here to stay,
Rain, rain, fall today.

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Comments (5)

i liked this poem very much it sparked my creative side of me dosn't happen that often anymore but you can check out my poem there good and i think you would like it
Really darling, you are good. Keep it up - this poem makes one think.
Wonderful poem, cleansing, sobering, love duncan X
Good rythym. Try to find some workshops on poetics in that backwater place you live.
They say god is in the rain.... rain is the base in life.....rain... is but the drops of life.. rain... will always stay... in our heart and mind... rain we need it everyday.... so true... good writing thompson..keep it up...