LB (31 may 1991 / empangeni, south africa)


raindrops fall on my window pane,
can't believe i'm like this again.
still thinking about how a love just like ours
could just fade away...

was it me that did something wrong?
or had it been like this all along?
still asking the questions i know
can't be answered so easily...
still struck by the fact that from now on
there'll just be a you...and me

User Rating: 3,5 / 5 ( 15 votes ) 13

Comments (13)

umm are you from south AFRICA? ? OMG OKHAY! ! ! ? so..Ur african? ! ! Nice! ! ? ? xD Ashely...~~~
You have captured the pain of separation most concisely in this poem. Keep on writing, Londiwe.
rain drops or crystal of love sent for you from heavens above each dropp smelling life, joy and enrichment may this one be the rain of fulfilment... nice my poems called the rain song and an ode for rain
gereat poem! ! 10++
yab ya keep it up little QUEEN.
See More