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Rains Of Peace
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Rains Of Peace

Poem By koyel mitra

The bright, robust sun
and the dark clouds
are in the thick of fray.
Nobody can guess
who will win the fight.

The brawl reached its climax
with a wreak of vengeance
the nimbus clouds
engulfed the radiant sun.

A streak of lightning
forked across the sky,
heavy rumbling thunder
pouring on the earth
the rains of peace!

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I love the picture it brought to mind because the poem played a short story inside. Great Poem.
nice imagery of words u drew... :)
nature imagery weaved well with opaque theme...well done
Koyel, Please forgive my lack of professional courtesy in not commenting on your poems sooner. I too enjoyed RAINS OF PEACE. I liked the idea of putting both the Sun and Clouds into the same ring, and letting them go at it! This time the clouds won! I'll be watching for the re-match! your friend Mike
short simple and sweet


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