~razor~

Poem By Patrick Bateman

Crimson Release
Anguish Decrease

Addictive Pain
Sleeve's Red Stain

Scales of October
Tipped Right Over

Framework Buckling
Lunatic Chuckling

Sanity Erodes
Mentality Explodes

Advocating Horror
Felodese Explorer

Hampering Solutions
Is society's pollutions.

Comments about ~razor~

You used a common subject, but this style is unique to the subject, and you exploited it to the fullest. It's easy to read, moves well, speaks simply but deeply. Perfectly executed. Great piece.


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