Real Women

Reality is nothing when you die,
So, why we always cry about time?
All thoughts, dreams in our mind fly,
They often speak to our nature prime.

by Ekaterina Polishchuk Click to read full poem

Comments about Real Women

Dr Tony Brahmin 23 Jun 2017 06:53
All women like gold stars in mystic sky, But look around, real angels live In women who just go along the street. They`ll be by you, And give the love that you forever need. love women, care and concern, the woman in the street... nice view of life and love..... you play with contrasts in this poem. thank you dear poetess. tony
Dev Anand 14 Apr 2016 11:34
But look around, real angels live In women who just go along the street. They`ll be by you, in you will they believe And give the love that you forever need. beautiful lines of the real woman who is love in person. thank you very much for this poem. love reading it..... dev
Chinedu Dike 04 Aug 2015 01:33
Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely penned with lovely rhyme scheme. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.
Adam Mckim 28 Mar 2012 12:14
I love this. They way you described women as angels, perfect. I had an angel once. sadly she left but oh was she a beautiful angel and just as you described too. Great write.
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 Mar 2012 07:28
They`ll be by you, in you will they believe And give the love that you forever need... that is real essence of life.. welcome dear poetess. so kind of you....
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 Mar 2012 01:36
Superb poem Ekaterina, absolutely wonderful......
Kasandra Kerfont 10 Mar 2012 04:50
Very beautiful concept, and rather truthful, I think. I like this.
Pheko Motaung 10 Mar 2012 09:10
A marvelous poem! Thank you very much.
Harindhar Reddy 09 Mar 2012 02:27
Yes life of has been changed and women and men has been transformed. There is truth in your words that physical beauty is not only treasure but let us measure the hearts of the Ladies........ Yet now ladies altered they only need wealth of the man but not his health... A sordid saga of life which is strife...... But look around, real angels live In women who just go along the street. Nevertheless, Well said Kate, I honor your words! Kudos!
Gordon Tseng 08 Mar 2012 09:21
But if you look for trust and real love, Don`t find your heart among the paper walls, --That's right!
Eric Cockrell 07 Mar 2012 06:49
each woman, a universe in herself! good one.
Whisperkwane Lamb 07 Mar 2012 06:18
well said young person, women are the angel of the universe and to see and reead that make it a fact...women are a roar from deep within man's core...thanks for sharing your mind...I loved it from within me...and I smiled to myself...
Lasoaphia Quxazs 07 Mar 2012 04:47
I do not have to vote here. It is clear, you are a wonderful poet and you do well with the language also. OK English is not my native either, so I can see the beauty of your work.
Binish Cd 07 Mar 2012 08:43
Really a nice imagination and the expression with a rhyme......... a very good poem.
Great poem. I like rhythm and rhyme and how you describe the Real Woman and the angels at the end...I like this kind of woman...bravo :)))
Wahab Abdul 06 Mar 2012 12:45
Reality is nothing when you die, So, why we always cry about time? All thoughts, dreams in our mind fly, They often speak to our nature prime. AN EXQUISITE PIECE OF POETRY WITH A STYLE, THE STRUCTURES OF THE VERSES AND THE PACE OF THINKING ARE PRAISE WORTHY INDEED.PLEASE CARRY ON AND LIVE UP WITH ALL THOSE, YOU SPRANG OUT AS A WONDER POETESS, A LOT OF PRAISE TO THEE AND YOUR POETIC QUALITY.