My Holy Land

Poem By Hasmukh Amathalal

when life's a struggle
and the world gets you down
just remember the one
who turned your life around
when you think no one cares
and no one could understand
he will be here waiting
just to hold your hand
when you feel so neglected
and you feel so alone
you feel so unwanted
in every fiber of your bones
remember the one
who told you he cared
the one who promised you
to hold you when your scared
remember the times
that you cried together
and somehow just doing that
made everything seem better
so if tomorrow morning you wake up
and the darkness doesn't let you see
just remember the one who loved you
just remember Me

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