Pains

Pains,
Here, there.
Now, then.
Not one place
But ten!

Breathe and get more of them.
Pains pain.

by Armin Zamani

Comments (2)

Quite a uhm er, clever little poem. -chuck
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I love this LOTS! Words, thought, attitude, action... As for repartee, same thing here: so often, the right words, the PERFECT words, come minutes/hours too late. I think, however, you're one up on him anyway.