Response To Edgar Allen Poe's Alone

Poem By Jasmine Williams

On my darkest day in May
Our paths converged a dissimilar way
I too, enamored by the demon in view
He had taken from me what he took from you
I walked amongst the world in shame
Consumed by jealousy, a child’s game
Beaten by life’s hard hand in vain
I held my head and stifled my pain
Nightmares plague my vision still
Opened wounds have ceased to heal
I long for the day I cannot feel
Captivated by unsavory appeals
Until we met, that fortunate day
An iceberg of pain melted away
It was there, I felt a tremor of trust
Surrounded by the demons of dusk
I knew I would find a way through
Content in the darkness, content with you

Comments about Response To Edgar Allen Poe's Alone

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I knew I would find a way through Content in the darkness, content with you. The poem reflects the same image but with contented end as Alone. Great imagination.10+++
A good start with a nice poem, Jasmine. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.


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