LO (08/13/1945 / UTAH)

' Revelation

You alone reveal my soul,
The intimacy of my deepest thoughts
Wrapped around each emotion,
Each beat of my heart;

From infinite depths you see within,
Beneath the veil where truth lies,
This person that I am
Beneath your gaze - exposed;

No longer am I invisible -
The complexities of my inner mind
Unraveled, as the thread once coiled
Loosens beneath your touch;

A soul within a soul are we
Unfolding, as a blooming rose
That seeks the warmth of the sun............
Aroused from ancient slumber.


4/3/2009

User Rating: 2,9 / 5 ( 90 votes ) 9

Comments (9)

Beneath the veil where truth lies, This person that I am Beneath your gaze - exposed; Yes Linda I'm begining to decode the message :)
thank you Linda, a really enjoyable read. i connected so well with this poem. Chris
''No longer am I invisible - The complexities of my inner mind Unraveled, as the thread once coiled Loosens beneath your touch; '' I didn't read before something like this. It is wonderful.10++
I like these lines 'A soul within a soul are we Unfolding, as a blooming rose That seeks the warmth of the sun............ Aroused from ancient slumber.' nice one...very refreshing..helps to relax the sore mind with love shan
Hi Linda This one caught my eye. Another one that draws you in and keeps you there. Your words have such depth intimacy, and feeling that it cries out for a second read. Love is so often written about, so new poems need to be original. This has originality in abundance. I've written a song about it below: Tral la la.....Love it........Chorus.......refrain. Steve
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