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Footprints In The Sand

I stared down at them, placing
my own feet at their side.
They were tiny. Delicate.
A wave came and took them
with it, the sand supporting
me rolling away with it until
I could not stand.
I fell in the salty blackness.
I opened my eyes
to see the footprints
floating there beside me.

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You already know I'm gonna find you I'm gonna hunt you down I've got your necks on a string Better yet won't you get in the ring.....Pick your poison...I get things done in the darkness, follow you to the grave. very strong emotions......... anger kept long in the brain and in your thoughts can poison you and bring you to psychological difficulties. thank u dear poetess. a very fine poem. you have written a lot. tony
It's legendary, a superb creative effort manifests. Felt thrilled at the flow of words of your heart. Keep writing. Congratulations for being chosen POTD. Regards. Subhas
no stress passing under any circumstances Great write. Congrats on poem of the Day.
Wow. There is swift and sudden impact to the words you write. Channel your poetic energy to let your voice be heard! This is a masterful write, that touches upon some very real topics. Congratulations on being selected to be showcased! PEACE
Too much anger is not good. A brilliant poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and congrats.
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