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Road Of Life
SMF (18 oct 1988 / islamabad)

Road Of Life

Poem By syed muhammad furqan

Time is passing
the circle is shrinking
road is gloomy
traveler is muddled

sounds like dirges
sight of casket
randomizes the mind
the soul seems incomplete
traveler feels hollow


standing up with a will
efforts ending in smoke
rides, insane
traveler is fedup


ball keeps rolling
gets bigger and bigger on its way
isolation gave nothing but tears

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good subject matter and theme but somehow, the poem looks incomplete. something might be added to fill in the gaps. the writing style is good and it can be improved as well. keep writing.


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