Poem Hunter
JTC (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)


a rose's softness
the first time
i touch your skin

neighbour's bouquet
of roses at the window
my long lost love

that jade bangle
it resonates with my heart
a sale is done

a crushed rose
on the street
young man's uneasiness in the office

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I like this one, John, even though I'm not sure of everything you're trying to convey in it.