Roses Are Red: The Remix

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Sugar is sweet
....
Ok wait a sec
someone help me out here
is this a poem?
or just another corny pick up line

Roses are red?
i mean think...roses arent only red
Violets are blue?
violets are violet duh!
Sugar is sweet?
sugar isn't sweet its what makes things sweet

and if you think of it most people you say this to
are pretty repulsive in someways

If i were the one to write this
i would have used more truth
so here it goes

Roses are every color
violets are violet
sugar is sweet
learn from it.

by Cameron Brooks

Comments (1)

hey this is a fun piece Cameron! liked it :) Preets ps- see I've begun learning from sugar already, lol.