050811c Revolving Planet

clouds draw pictures on sea
masterpiece, erase it quickly
reaching to let be there a while
refuse, ripples came to shore
tears falling erase them all
went up to mountains, stayed

above my head, mind shadow
monochrome picture show
kiss by light and push by wind
giant brush keep on painting
while many watching their feet
they're missing lots; they'll regret


(050811)

by Manonton Dalan

Comments (1)

I think it has all the warmth and idealism of the VADS in the First World War. I find it enchanting.