SH (March 17,1971 / Edmonds, Washington)

Ruins

Wake me when It's over
I'm looking under
- An auburn sky
Take me beside the shadows
Nights reflection
- I'm chasing my......
Lines I've laid and the bridges I've crossed
Words slipped by and the days I've lost
- I lay here dwelling helplessly -
Lines I've laid and the bridges I've crossed
Words slipped by and the days I've lost
- Hmm.. beg to come and comfort me -
What I see

I peak, lifes arrousal
Accupuncture
- Blades of grass
I lay looking over
The clouds roll under
- I'm floating past
Marks I've made and the rolls that I choose
Friends Ive burned and the drugs that I've used
- I lay here regretting constantly -
Marks I've made and the rolls that I choose
People burned and the drugs that I've used
- Hmm.. beg to come and comfort me -
All I see
Looking around me
All I see

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What a beautiful and poignant poem... evoking that mysterious feeling of knowing that someone has been inside your head.
Very interesting poem, original writing! I loved reading it! ~~Elya Thorn~~