BR (12/01/65 / Wiltshire)

Sacred Woman

Sending love
Amongst each other
Concentrating on peace
Representing mother earth
Everlasting reproduction
Delivering harmony
When we can
Only slowing to let you rest
My men about me
Allow calm tenderness
Now.

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This was very universal until you got to the last three lines Poly, the 'My men about me', kind of returned it to your personal possession poem and I think, leaving the now out would not hurt either, the tenderness as an ending thought is very good. A strong poem with a good message. Welcome to PH, smiling at you, Tai