Charles Horton Cooley

not too sensitive
is the shrew,

that is talent

it rises more likely
in the world


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omgsh, I think i know what this is about. You said you were adopted right? Is this about your real mother, just a guess. But even if its not its deffinetly about someone that walked out on you. Great way of putting your words. You show your emotion good, its very deep. Its so beautiful. I love the way u describe it like a dongene with black walls and emtiness. Awesome descripsion. -meghan
WOW....thats so deep.I love it.
Very touching! Lots of imagination! Keep writing! Lilly
Beautiful imagery! Absolutely full of imagery which gave me a chill to feel what you were feeling when you wrote this poem...very sad and heartwrenching way to describe a love/friendship that has ended. I am sorry for your pain...unfortunately with each great poem written the poet must have felt 'Something' deeply.......U sure did in this one. Please keep sharing you are so talented! Take care of U =Shelley= 10/10
sob..sob..realy touching.
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