He's in this room?
He's not being rocked
Side to side.
by Francis Santaquilani
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13 Jan 2015 06:57
Fantastic poem. Absolutely wonderful, and congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day for January 13 for the third year in a row!
13 Jan 2014 07:10
Well done indeed. A sad poem, but significant.
13 Jan 2014 03:11
Well scripted. I like it. Keep writing
13 Jan 2013 05:54
A fine write that deserves all the credit it has become - good work.
24 Jan 2006 09:25
The trip here was worth it. Well done. I too loved the line where the sea had lost interst in the shore. And realizing at the end the guy was on life support... (Well for me that's what it evoked) Amicalement votre, Ronberge
24 Jan 2006 02:28
A fine write indeed Francis. A deft handling of some very picturesque analogies.
24 Jan 2006 01:07
Perfectly done, so evocative.
24 Jan 2006 10:27
Wonderful imagery and language. Masterful. -chuck