Sailing On

He's in this room?

He's not being rocked
Side to side.

by Francis Santaquilani Click to read full poem

Comments (8)

Fantastic poem. Absolutely wonderful, and congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day for January 13 for the third year in a row!
Well done indeed. A sad poem, but significant.
Well scripted. I like it. Keep writing
A fine write that deserves all the credit it has become - good work.
The trip here was worth it. Well done. I too loved the line where the sea had lost interst in the shore. And realizing at the end the guy was on life support... (Well for me that's what it evoked) Amicalement votre, Ronberge
A fine write indeed Francis. A deft handling of some very picturesque analogies.
Perfectly done, so evocative.
Wonderful imagery and language. Masterful. -chuck