****good Morning Sunshine

Good morning sunshine!

I know how much you worry about old age
But I'll tell you, let old age worry and not you

Your light and rays are getting stronger
And the world noticed that and agree

without hesitation and it will take
millions of years before
you become a.black hole.

by HAZEL Calumarde

Comments (8)

I see the seascape in all your poems and feel that this poem has a deep autobiographical touch! You are able to give life and 'fire' to all your emotions! There is a kind of melancholy in most of your poems that gives a tug at the heart strings of the reader! Your poems are so emotive, engrossing and touchingly expressive! Great write Hazel!
To escape the misery of her younger years, Where she never felt at home, only the ocean Freed her tied up emotions, To a softer surging of the ocean, a lot of imagination to describe the inner pain of the past of bygone years. so well and poetically illustrated.. thank you dear poetess Hezel for this beautiful poem. tony
She wanders all over this planet without luggage, Just her heavy baggage of never forgotten years, - - - - - you have such a talent in writing verses like this- -creating mood, image, and searing thought. There are so many of these thought and emotion provoking lines in this poem that the reader are drawn to explore. So very well done, my friend across the ocean
Years of never feeling at ease A time for her heart-breaking tears, emotions and sentiments take her to far from her usual life where she alone suffers, dear poetess I love these two lines, so much, , , Your writings I always enjoy, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++ 10
VERY BEAUTIFUL AS ALWAYS DO READ ME AGAIN O POET SUNNEVER SETS YES POET ME POET U KNOW ME
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