Piercing Through Back

You are piercing
Through back,
And I lack words
To express myself.

What type of happiness
You get that I want to know.
And my desire is that
You should desist yourself.

by Gajanan Mishra

Comments (1)

I like the way this poem develops. I think that it sarts well and finishes well, too. Short poems can be powerful, too, if one knows how to write it. The chanlange here is that being short you have not much room for wordiness and have to go right to the point that you want yo make. Good try! Luis Estable