Senryu As They Float

The leaves in the trees

sigh, whisper your name as they

softly float away.

by Heather Burns

Comments (3)

I think that the poem in just in three lines speaks a lot about the phenomenon of life and it floats away. A mystic poem may I think about it.
Deep meaning just in three lines, thanks for the share 10/10
Wonderful senryu. Thanks for sharing