LO (08/13/1945 / UTAH)

' Senseless

Senseless...................
Brothers lost -
Cut down in their prime;

Senseless...................
Lives terminated -
Families mourning their loss;

Senseless...................
Protectors of innocence -
Sacrificed in cold blood;

Now in peace released -
Beating hearts now ceased...........................
Senseless.


3/22/2009

(In reference to murdered Oakland, CA police officers)

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Comments (4)

this sort of good one for me ma'am.... i mean people think i talk nonsense all the time! ! ! well most things we do are in a way senseless indeed! ! ! for instance i feel some times there is no point in doing anything if we are gona die, in anycase this sort of refreshing poem.. well expressed indeed! ! ! ...10+++ with lots of love shan(love is not something senseless i guess)
Senseless................... Brothers lost - Cut down in their prime; , , , , , , , , , , beautiful write. eye catching imagination... lovely
senseless global violence ef efectively xpressed with an economy of words...
Indeed, Midnight...tho' unfortunately society in terms of mindset & culture, have sometimes left us with very few options than to enforce justice by anathematic means...but, yes...in our current situation, in general...opportunities were passed-on, and our efforts too many times...fatefully mishandled... Strong words...Sound message...Senseless people, indeed we can be....Splendid Work, Linda! FRank/FjR ...2009...