Sentiment

She learned to read and write
She fell down and rose up
She became sad and glad
She fell in love...broke up
She failed and succeeded
She was wounded and healed
Where were you all these years? ? ?


1st of May 2007

by Jazlle D. H.

Comments (4)

Beautiful --short and sweet. Yes where were you when all this happened? 10 points to you
Hmm...this is another deep one...ends powerfully...beautiful work here again...keep it up!
thought provoking, love may infuse again................well penned, thanks for sharing
The final question is topical. I believe this poem states the matter of femininity as it really is. Girls can be very busy and succeeed, but men must be near to them. The next topic should be male role, but it must be written by somebody else.