Seven Whispers

Seven Whispers pass me by.
Unknowing, unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of the mind.
The mind is imaginary, full of trickery and magical places
Which makes up fantasies of desires you wish you could posses but only have a glance of.
Seeing through the eyes of the mind you see only images you create but cannot be brought to the existence of life.

Seven Whispers pass me by,
Unknowing, unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of love.
Love is peace and beauty in which your heart creates to defend the world from complete loneliness.
Love leaves life feeling wonderful, full of mixed emotions with so much passion and lust for someone; wanting someone is knowing someone.
Life gives us the chance to love, to show us the possibilities of feeling so much wanted in the world, so much accepted in the eyes of a lover.

Seven Whispers pass me by,
Unknowing, Unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of beauty.
Beauty is the light that enrolled itself upon you at the very beginning of life.
Beauty is the curves of your face, the soft touch of each hand and the dazzle that lingers in the creation of sight.
Beauty is the gift that only unique purposes of it can be shown.
Beauty happens each time a smile lifts on your face making everyone’s sins fly away.
Beauty is all around you, each breath you take, each choice you make.
Beauty will always be a part of you.



Seven Whispers pass me by,
Unknowing, unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of kindness.
Kindness is the humane gift the mind bestows upon you.
It makes life seem so generous so affectionate towards a circle of pleasures and happiness.
Kindness is a place in your heart that is never forgotten and never revealed until the true respect is shown for one another.
Kindness is the one thing in life that keeps us in harmony and is never ashamed for its true purpose.
Kindness is a devoted expression of love and peace entwined.

Seven Whispers pass me by,
Unknowing, unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of freedom.
Freedom is each part of life, if accepted.
It expresses the gift to be able to give you the choice of being openhearted, sharing you wisdom around the world.
Freedom gives you the feeling to be able to stand in a crowd and to be listened to by everyone not even letting people have the temptation to be ignore.
Giving the Chance of your opinion to create a difference in people’s life around you.
Freedom is the gift to show us not to be banished in darkness but in light.

Seven Whispers pass me by,
Unknowing, Unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of the world.
Every step you take is a choice in which the world gives you as a challenge, testing the skills of your intelligence.
The world is a wondrous place, where you’re in the willing hands of the choices you make.
Taking a cautious step into a new reality, meeting people and learning all the facts and opinions of the choices the world gives you, as a secret, which lies in the whispers of the world.
The world is a place only you can create.
Given a chance to be able to show the talents of cleverness in which you posses in the world


Seven whispers pass me by,
Unknowing, unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of life.
No-one see’s or knows what life is but six other whispers give us a glimpse of life.
Why dwindle to face not knowing whether life is reality or fantasy. Take a moment to let your heart find answers to a question, which is unable to be answered; you will see a reason why no one will ever know.
Always let life guide you. Keep each precious moment as a memory and let the gift of not knowing challenge you. Let my seven whispers inspire you to find happiness in yourself and the things around you.

by jodi right

Comments (7)

wow....you've really gone and done it this time....
Wow, Jodi. What a vision. I read this first because you said it was your first poem, and I'm amazed. You certainly have a gift.
I will never look at poetry the same again. You should teach poetry, later.
A beautiful poem, very classical loved it
Very sincere and refreshing. Perhaps it could be advantageously shortened a bit and there are one or two lines that could be tidied up, but that is nit-picking; on the whole it is a lovely poem
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