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I'M Giving Up On Loving You

I'M Giving Up On Loving You

No longer can I take the pain you put me through,
In my heart I know I will always have feelings for you,
Maybe I will get lucky and some day you will care,
For now I can hide my pain deep within my broken,
The time we’ve been apart,
Made me realize with guys there is no second chance,
You almost came back to me,
But of course you changed your mind,
You have told me so many excuses,
I know them all by heart,
But still they rip me apart,
You ignore me as if I was never a part of your life,
But at least now I know what loves all about,
It starts out happy and then ends in a rush of tears,
Truths turn into lies,
It never ends in happiness,
But who said it would?

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Comments (4)

wow silence strikes with that heavy hand doesn't it...great work..~hazel!
well......silence hurts this much? real good! ....................or shall we say straight arrow to her heart!
Wow...so beautifully written...I'm very impressed! Hugs, Dee
very poignant. I ve felt the pain of silence and you have captured it in your poem.