Shaking In My Chucks

Emo kid.
Ha!

A little AFI never hurt
If you take away the razor first.

Davey rattles my hormones
More than he
Soothes my 'bleeding soul'.

I just cant resist a man
With long black hair
An orgasmic voice
And lots of eyeliner.

by Kate Breeze

Comments (1)

Maybe make it deeper? if the lust aspect is to come through the words? a sense of sexual savagery could be added? But hey, its different! !