‘she Looks Into Me…’
She looks into me
The unknowing heart
To see if I love
She has confidence she forgets
by Paul Eluard
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14 Oct 11:26
Together inseparable Alive alive He alive she alive And my head rolls through her dreams. great great poem written great 10++
14 Oct 03:11
Beautiful imagery. All we need to feel is the joy of being alive.
Tamara Beryl Latham
14 Oct 01:13
An excellent poem with an emphasis on feelings from the heart. Great images, however, the last line " detracts from the poem overall." Picturing a rolling head is way too vivid for my imagination. : -)
Tamara Beryl Latham
14 Oct 01:01
Great imagery in this poem that is illustrative of the author's love. The last line " And my head rolls through her dreams" is a bit confusing and detracts from the poem. Overall a great write. : -)
Anil Kumar Panda
14 Oct 11:31
Excellent poetry. Strong and powerful imagery. Like to read again and again. So nice.
14 Oct 07:03
'Where are we together inseparable, Alive Alive: Poem is very creative and beautifully crafted.
14 Oct 06:57
Together inseparable Alive alive........here is the essence of the poem. A brilliant poem in brief by Paul Eluard is well executed.
14 Oct 05:43
Together inseparable Alive alive He alive she alive/// beautiful expression on the love
14 Oct 01:46
Falling asleep and dreaming in mutual closeness, as the poem goes its small length, the reader too tends to dream, half alive, half asleep, vaguely in dream.
14 Oct 12:44
Beautiful poem...expressing deep communion between lovers. Indeed, I would suggest that it exemplifies Martin Buber's notion of the I - Thou.
14 Oct 12:24
A very wonderful love poem. Modernly, romantic! . Very impressive and well translated. So difficult to do!
28 Jun 08:36
Very Beautiful poem. 'My head rolls through her dreams" doesn't allude to guillotine or I don't know what. Some people will never be able to understand metaphors, poetry and surrealism.
14 Oct 2018 09:08
I just got censored! ! ! ! There is foul language all over the place in PH yet I get censored for making a reference to this sounding like an S @ M love poem. What? It was said with humor and it carried no lurid detail.... I don't believe this! ! I am going to make a copy of this.
14 Oct 2018 09:03
is there something wrong with saying that this could be a love poem from a to a? ? ? we shall see if those two words go through this time
14 Oct 2018 09:00
from a to a
14 Oct 2018 08:57
And my head rolls through her dreams. - - - I was dreaming along with this poem until this line which hopefully resulted from a faulty translation because all I visualized was the head rolling iff the guillotine.... yikes, ... not a good ending for a love poem unless it is from a to a i
14 Oct 2018 05:38
Very beautiful this poem Congratulations
14 Oct 2018 05:33
Very good this poem, congratulations!
Edward Kofi Louis
14 Oct 2018 01:23
To see if i love her! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Pranab K Chakraborty
14 Oct 2018 01:13
Simply the essence of eternal love. Expressed through lucid words, exposed nicely her 'not ever died look'. Nice put.