She Said...

She quietly said, 'Milton... I love you.'
His light heart ballooned to the moon.
She flew out - - 'So shy! ' he thought, but he knew
That wedding bells would clanggg very soon.

by Esther Leclerc Click to read full poem

Comments (13)

You know, ...I think that happened ME! ! it anyway. Robert
Utterly hilariously wonderful! A shining juxtaposition of soaring emotion and watching it all come down (so to speak) .... t x
This was just hysterically funny...poor Milty! Lucky ' Hugh' (for writing such a funny poem!)
Brilliant, just brilliant!
nice twist, you really had me going there... i wonder what was the inspiration. cheers, masha
Esther the jester strikes again... very hu(gh) morous! ! Brian
Esther, your wonderful humour abounds - simply superb! Grinning...Justine :)
Esther, this is superb. Talk about slapstick! Brilliant punch line. Poor old Milton. Silly twisted boy. 'His light heart ballooned to the moon' is exquisite! love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Hugh must be Joe King? ; ¬) Danny
Ha, ha, poor Milton! ! !
Esther, you wrote with your pitchfork today, now admit it! Quite an amusing Read....I am not what one would characterize as a'laugher', however, there was a pronounced bellow heard by all in my general vicinity, upon my Reading the final line of your work....''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
Are you sure she wasn't talking about her favorite color 'olive hue'? Fun one, Est! -chuck
Hee hee hee! Loved this Esther, thanks for the giggle. (looks like our Chuck's got some competition in the humour stakes!) Hugs Anna xxx