Shower

Water is sprinking from above
Drop by drop as it falls on me
It wets my soul when I am soaked
I feel cold as it chills deep inside
Everything is washed and cleansed
Renewed just in a blink
Count the drops dripping through your hair
These are the moments of freshness
The peace I receive is beyond words
The tiny droplet that settles on glass door
Though it blurs the vision
Just needed fingers to wipe away
To see the clearer image a few feet away

by Rini Shibu

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Shower is a beautiful poem
A shower early in the morning gives such a refreshing feel to the whole day! Reading your poem, I felt as if I was having a cool shower in summer!
part 3 Quote: The tiny droplet that settles on glass door Though it blurs the vision Just needed fingers to wipe away To see the clearer image a few feet away unquote A tiny droplet of water on your sticking to soul, blurs your vision-clarity of thought and purpose. It needs to be wiped away, so that clarity returns. These lines exude positive thought and energy, as every poem of Rini does. Wonderful. A 100++
part 2 Water just cleans the body. But, soaking in a shower has a cleansing effect on the soul. We are totally refreshed and rejuvanated. Quote: The peace I receive is beyond words How true! continued....
Hi Rini, Who does not wish to get drenched in a shower! As a child we have done it, time and over. But, once we have grown up, we seek safer pastures, fearing that if a grown-up walks in rain, he may land in a lunatic asylum. This is the first thought that came in my mind, on reading the first line. Then, when we read on, we understand that there is more to it! ! Contd...
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