Shravan Mas

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And life goes on for everyone in different ways... Thanks for bringing lives that we don't think about much to life in your poetry, Charlie. You know, everyone was a baby once (do you know what I mean?) Esther : ]
I loved this - your compassion extends to all mankind, I think. Besides, it was just a great read. Your poetry is so lyrical, I'm just envious for a bit. Then grateful for the experience.
Nice flow and use of the rhymes and repeated lines. Sounds almost like a song. -chuck
Restless spirit, nicely written Patricia
I enjoyed this...really great...take care, amanda