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Silent Commotion
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Silent Commotion

Poem By Verona Valentine

It was the same old brand new feeling
It was warm and comfortable yet annoying
It brought her unexplainable happiness
That accompanied by uncertain uneasiness

A girl once filled with smiles and excitement
Had become empty and full of despair
She held her heart that was full of torment
Breathing heavily trying to grasp for air

Her face reflected innocence
But radiated discrete feel of sorrow
She couldn’t find reason for existence
Or surviving without hope for better tomorrow

Fueled by hatred in her cheerless heart
Her eyes signifies nothing but depression
Her heart was bluntly broken apart
She shed her tears in a silent commotion

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really good poem! i love it!